Yesterday, while I was enjoying the nice weather and BBQ at Lina’s parents place, I was attacked. With food in hand, I took a seat on a stool while making faces at her nephew. I lean back…and wham! I got hit. I had a moment to think, “wow that hurt. What was that? Did I get stung?” Then it started to “burn” in the lower back–really bad. I looked around and sure enough, on the ground, the little sucker was crawling with the last of his life. I took satisfaction in the fact the it cost him more than it hurt me.
Fortunately, the pain subsided in a couple of hours but I’m still reminded of it every time that I lean back in a chair.
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Ohhhh…. poor little baby…! Will the whining ever stop??!! Let me find you a tissue, and then remind you that it serves you right getting stung while making obscene faces at little children! What kind of a person are you!!?? Though this is mildly amusing, we still need to work on dramatic and interesting. Excessive use of exclamation marks does not make it interesting. Please try to correct this before blogging further. Thank you.